Clarity of voice and expression: how clearly are you expressing yourself? Did you speak formally and with confidently?

WWW- I spoke very confidently and was not shy. I feel like during my performance i gave eye contact throughout pulling the audiences attention. This was good because it for the audience they could be more engaged in what i was saying, decreasing the tension in the room.

EBI-i think because i am such a confident link in my group I defiantly should have helped other in my group raising the standards of Spartans performance as a whole.

Use of technical language: are you using key media terms?

WWW- Spartans did not fail to use correct English. This was key to us as we thought about our scrip beforehand avoiding this issue.

EBI- though we used good English it would of been better if we did imply some of our media key words to out presentation showing we professional side to our product.

Body language- are the making eye contact and facing the audience?

WWW- personally my body language was enough as i was very nervous but did not give it away by fidgeting around

EBI-on the other hand Spartan could have been unique and filled our space differently for other groups. We were all squashed up in a straight line lowering body language below our standers.

use of PowerPoint- how effectively was the ppt used?

WWW- our PowerPoint contained the right information for our task that we had to complete. You can find out ppt on my blog.

EBI- we mentioned how our group got constructive criticism but we did not say what that had an effect on out updated channel. This left the audience confused as to how we turned Spartans flaws and made it better

in conclusion i think that our presentation was a great success rating myself and my team 8/10 .

Things we can do to improve on the future is working on weaker links in our group and stand out more from other rivals.

By Kiarah Laurence

Manager of spartan